lynn_fox ([info]lynn_fox) wrote in [info]geekfiction,

Proposition

Title: Proposition
Author: Lynn Fox
Pairing: GSR
Rating: PG-13 I think
Summary: What did Sara think, and what happened next? Post 8x04(Lamest summary EVER!)
A/N: So yeah, I got a little frustrated by the lack of actual kissing (and tongue!) so... It's very short though.


“Y’know, maybe we should get married,” he said. Just like that, at the most unexpected moment I could have imagined. Then again, I didn’t think he’d ever ask me to marry him. Not that I don’t think he loves me or anything, but it’s something we never talked about, and honestly, I haven’t exactly been very positive about weddings and such over the years.

But there it was, he asked me to be his wife, or something to that effect, and I freaked, just a little bit. Should’ve known the damn bee would sting me. Maybe it was one of his experiments. I remained kind of speechless for a second there. Apart from not having thought about him asking me, I’d never thought about answering that question either.

He started busying himself with taking the stinger out of the palm of my hand, softly repeating his question, and suddenly I found myself interrupting him with a ‘yes’.

I, Sara Sidle, said ‘yes’ to a proposal. Seriously, how strange is that? The world must be coming to an end, but what a way to go.

“Yes, let’s get married!” I beamed, and I can’t really remember a happier time in my life, except for maybe –y’know- when I found out I was still alive and Gil was with me in that chopper and such. Although this was an entirely different kind of happy. Exhilarating, shocking, terrifying, completely unreal, and yet absolutely thrilling, and amazing.

It was kind of like the first time we had sex. We were both so nervous, and scared, but we knew this was the way, the only way, and we just had to do this, for us.

I wanted to kiss him, and he obviously wanted to do the same because we both leaned in at the same time, forgetting about the masks. Shit.

“I hate bees,” he said. I just laughed at him.

He closed the crate, or whatever you might call it, and took me inside. The moment we were outside the bees reach, he took of his mask, and mine, and he pushed me up against a wall and kissed me.

Obviously we’ve done that a lot over the past two years, so it wasn’t really something new, but this was without a doubt different from any kiss we shared before. We have gone from friends, to co-workers, to bed-buddies, to lovers, to secret-affair-havers, to practically living together in secret, to being openly in love, to being engaged over the past nine years.

I can only speak for myself of course, but to me the level of intimacy has increased with every turn our relationship has taken. And this new level is taking my breath away.

Tearing my lips away from his hungry mouth, I breathed in his ear, “if I didn’t have to get back to my case…Hmm…”

“Dinner tonight, to celebrate?” he asked.

“I think it’s best if we order in.”

Let’s just say that Denali’s have a lot of room in the back, I got back to my case half an hour late, and I’m not completely sure my clothes would’ve passed an ALS test…
Tags: *teen, -grissom/sara, lynn_fox

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[info]elialys

October 19 2007, 11:29:47 UTC 4 years ago

Let’s just say that Denali’s have a lot of room in the back, I got back to my case half an hour late, and I’m not completely sure my clothes would’ve passed an ALS test…

This totally cracked me up!! XD

Great take on the scene. I'm already a huge puddle of goo, but you managed to make me melt even more somehow! =D Really tender and lovely ♥
And I LOVE that line:

We have gone from friends, to co-workers, to bed-buddies, to lovers, to secret-affair-havers, to practically living together in secret, to being openly in love, to being engaged over the past nine years.

They've been through so much. I am so, so, soooo happy for them right now =D And so happy for us LOL!

Thank you!

[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 12:48:56 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you for your nice review!

[info]lynn_fox

4 years ago

[info]scullyseviltwin

October 19 2007, 11:45:41 UTC 4 years ago

You need to change the pairing on the main page; it's spoilerific.

[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 12:47:26 UTC 4 years ago

Oh God, I'm so sorry. Changed it at once!
Didn't really think about it being spoilery because it had aired, but you're right. Sorry!

[info]kosmickway

October 19 2007, 12:14:30 UTC 4 years ago

What was UP with the lack of kissing, huh? Billy's all "I totally want to kiss her before the show ends ..."

You're the executive producer, man! Suck it up and DO IT! Make your squealing girly fans have coronaries!

Way to make the scene a lot nicer. Totally anti-climactic on the show!



[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 12:49:59 UTC 4 years ago

Really? I cried! And then, admittedly, I cried even harder when they couldn't kiss. LOL

[info]phdelicious

October 19 2007, 13:50:02 UTC 4 years ago

Let’s just say that Denali’s have a lot of room in the back, I got back to my case half an hour late, and I’m not completely sure my clothes would’ve passed an ALS test…

*giggles*

A very nice addition, because while bumping masks is cute a kiss woulda been much better.

[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 15:38:53 UTC 4 years ago

Well... I was ready to jump Grissom, so I can't imagine how incredibly he must've turned Sara on! LOL

Ahh! That must've been why Cath thought she turned him on! He was in his office thinking back to humping Sara, and -contrary to standard beliefs- he was like a young stud, ready to go again!

[info]doom_cherries

October 19 2007, 14:07:14 UTC 4 years ago

Haha, the last line made my giggle. Very well done!

[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 15:39:16 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks!

[info]ellenkhursh

October 19 2007, 14:40:08 UTC 4 years ago

Well done. I was actually thinking that myself, about the bees and freaking out and getting stung. I liked the almost-kiss, but a "pin you against the wall and kiss you" scene WOULD have been even better... theoretically, there IS still time to get it. (Say, d'you suppose that session in the Denali was why she looked all dazed afterwards? :)

[info]lynn_fox

October 19 2007, 15:40:08 UTC 4 years ago

Must've been... Wouldn't you be a bit dazed after your new fiancé had brought you multiple orgasms? LOL

[info]buffyangellvr23

October 19 2007, 19:50:00 UTC 4 years ago

yesyesyes....I totally hope that's what happened afterward :D

lol @ you...case, what kind of case?

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:45:34 UTC 4 years ago

I don't think either of them cared about other things they had to do. Got to love puppy-dog Grissom!

[info]firthivated

October 19 2007, 20:20:12 UTC 4 years ago

*sigh* That was just perfect. What a wonderful compliment to the show last night. I wish there had have been a "pinned to the wall" scene! Thanks...I'm all melty now.

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:46:39 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks *blush*

[info]saragris4ever

October 19 2007, 21:09:27 UTC 4 years ago

Great

That was way good.... I loved it they are so cute together...

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:47:45 UTC 4 years ago

Re: Great

Well, there is of course the ancient law of cuteness...

Nerdy + Clumsy = Cute!!

Yes, they taught me that in kindergarten!

Anonymous

October 19 2007, 23:18:21 UTC 4 years ago

Every story I read of yours about our GSR moments brings a smile to my face!
Thank you =)
Hurry up and write another one LOL with more smut?

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:49:11 UTC 4 years ago

Oh my, and here I was trying to write something other than smut for a change LOL

But... My muze (and two certain characters) have gotten me in the mood to write dirty rough smut for a while now, so I think you won't have to wait long...

[info]wickedground

October 20 2007, 00:21:47 UTC 4 years ago

this made me grin madly ♥ :D

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:49:26 UTC 4 years ago

Then again, you were wicked already LOL

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[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:49:42 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you, the pleasure was all mine ;)

[info]jessickuh

October 20 2007, 01:39:41 UTC 4 years ago

So effing cute. Maybe *we* should get married. I mean, because you wrote this and all.

[info]lynn_fox

October 20 2007, 07:50:55 UTC 4 years ago

Ahhh Jess, you know I'd love too! How about a menage a trois though? My hubby is very sweet, and if I asked him, I think he'd dye his cute curls grey!

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