rosesinjanuary ([info]rosesinjanuary) wrote in [info]geekfiction,
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A Good Day

Title: A Good Day
Rating: G
Spoilers: 8x02, "A La Carte"
Focus: Sara, team, mentions of GSR
Words: 373

Author's Note: This is very short, and probably a bit rough, but I just watched "A La Carte" and...well, I just needed to get this written and posted. It's also quite angsty for me, the queen of fluff (don't worry, more fluff is coming!).




It was a good day.

After a few rounds, Catherine came and watched with her. The men insisted that they divide up the cheering equally, so Sara yelled herself hoarse for Grissom and Greg, and Catherine took Warrick and Nick, screaming madly each time they came around the bend.

“He loves you,” Catherine said suddenly, as they watched the men whiz around the track.

Sara laughed as Grissom neatly cut Nick off, grinning like a kid in a candy shop. “And I love him,” she said.

*

It was a good day.

The guys hugged her carefully and fussed over her and refused to let her carry anything.

This for some reason included napkins, which involved an amusing incident where she got up to get some, and Greg, attempting to beat her to it, somehow ended up stretched out on the floor with french fries all over him.

Normally she hated being treated like a porcelain doll, but these were her guys, and they had been scared for her. And she loved them, so she let them fight over who got to fetch her pizza, move her chair, and refill her drink.

That was how they showed love.

*

It was a good day.

They argued and teased and laughed, and talked about cases and theories and conferences and papers.

She was able to sit next to Grissom, so close they were nearly touching, and not be afraid that anyone would notice their complete and total lack of personal space.

She wasn’t trapped under a car or wandering in the desert.

She wasn’t stuck in a foster home with too many kids and not enough time, attention, or anything else.

She wasn’t being shoved across the room into a door by one or the other of her parents.

She wasn’t alone. Not anymore.

*

It was a good day.

And she clung to that memory once they got home, when she curled up on the couch and cried in huge, shuddering sobs, cursing Ecklie and departmental regulations and their stupid, ridiculous desperation for privacy and anything else she could think of, while Grissom held her and rubbed her back and made soothing noises, because he understood.

Because even good days, even the best days, can be bittersweet.
Tags: -sara, rosesinjanuary

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  • 17 comments

[info]buffyangellvr23

October 5 2007, 03:46:27 UTC 4 years ago

awww...I don't think it's angsty so much as, like the ep, bittersweet. Nice job.

[info]kay18jay

October 5 2007, 03:59:02 UTC 4 years ago

Wow! This is really really nice! I love how you write about the guys being "her guys", and fussing over her. and I really love how you have them sitting so close, great visual. and of course the ending, very touching. Loved it!!
Thanks,
Katherine

Anonymous

October 5 2007, 04:07:54 UTC 4 years ago

cancsifan

I am amazed you got this up so quickly. And you nailed Sara's feeling. She looked so lonely standing there by herself. It's heartbreaking that she has to leave her family just when she needs them most. Great job.

[info]doom_cherries

October 5 2007, 04:21:54 UTC 4 years ago

Oh God, I wanted to cry with her at the end of this episode. This was all very Sara.

[info]tearsandphotos

October 5 2007, 04:44:37 UTC 4 years ago

That was beautiful.

Poor Sara.

[info]tikismile

October 5 2007, 05:03:51 UTC 4 years ago

I loved it, and it is a perfect wrap up to her emotion at the end of the ep.

[info]plkphoto

October 5 2007, 05:36:48 UTC 4 years ago

This is amazing! I'm so impressed with how quickly you got this up and managed to nail down her emotions perfectly! Well done!!!

:-)
PLK

[info]zamboni12

October 5 2007, 08:19:29 UTC 4 years ago

Awwww! So beautiful! This was very much Sara! I cried with her in the end! Love and angst! Hope and fear! So close together! Bittersweet!
Very well done.
TC, Heike

[info]smacky30

October 5 2007, 11:08:17 UTC 4 years ago

She did look so very sad when she was watching them all. And her attempts at a smile whenever one of them could see her made her look even more lonely. You captured that very well. Good job.

[info]zequins

October 5 2007, 11:21:22 UTC 4 years ago

Very good portrayal of the episode. I think this is how most of us are feeling, bittersweet.
Great job.

[info]wobbear

October 5 2007, 11:25:50 UTC 4 years ago

This didn't look at all rough to me. It flowed beautifully from the little snapshots of the day (the Greg/napkin thing was a fun touch) through to the sobbing end at home. Your last line was a great wrap. Really nice job!

[info]firthivated

October 5 2007, 11:51:39 UTC 4 years ago

You perfectly captured the feeling at the end of last night's episode. Beautiful job!

[info]sciencekitty

October 5 2007, 14:44:54 UTC 4 years ago

*sniffle* This was absolutely wonderful. Love the way you captured the team and how Sara was feeling at the end.

[info]ardvari

October 5 2007, 16:55:08 UTC 4 years ago

Oh... I love your stuff.
This story was so sweet and the ending? Wonderful. Perfect.
I like how you set this up, how the mood of the entire piece is very clear from the beginning.
I can't say it enough: I love what you write.

[info]smashleyloureed

October 5 2007, 19:21:05 UTC 4 years ago

This was short and sweet! Even made me tear up a bit at the end!
Thanks for sharing it.

[info]wickedground

October 9 2007, 00:02:27 UTC 4 years ago

now you made me cry! :/ this was perfect.

[info]inalichenmanner

September 9 2008, 00:51:26 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I hated that no one noticed Sara's sadness in that episode. I know the writers did it deliberately for impact, but still! Very moving story.
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