Kristen Elizabeth ([info]belismakr) wrote in [info]geekfiction,
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Moving and Changing

Title: Moving and Changing
Author: Kristen Elizabeth
Rating: G
Pairing: GSR
Warnings: Fluff. I'm serious. Like cotton candy, dude.
Disclaimer: Characters contained within do not belong to me.
Author's Notes: I wrote this for [info]mingsmommy who's been a little under the weather lately. Fluff is like chicken soup for her. I hope you enjoy it, too;)



Moving and Changing
by Kristen Elizabeth

*****

A little gasp from the other side of the couch pulled Grissom’s nose out of his book. He was about to ask if everything was okay, but then he saw her put a hand to her rounded stomach. She smiled and relaxed back into the cushions.

“I wish I could feel it.”

With her feet in his lap, Sara used her toe to nudge his belly button playfully. “You have,” she reminded him. “The very first time she moved, in fact.”

He set down his book and picked up her foot, massaging it with his thumbs. “Only from the outside perspective. I’m sure it’s a whole different experience from where you’re sitting.”

“Gil Grissom…” She let out a small groan when he hit just the right spot. When she recovered, she gave him a sly smile. “Are you saying you’d like to carry this kid?”

Grissom was quiet for a second as he continued his foot-rub. “Sometimes when I’m working or walking the dog or even just reading a book on the couch…I forget that there’s this little person growing inside of you. And when I remember, I get mad at myself. Because how could I forget that, even for a second?”

“And you figure that because I’m as big as a house, and have the dubious privilege of feeling our daughter kicking my kidneys, that I don’t ever forget?”

“Something like that.”

She shook her head, clearly amused. “I’ll let you in on a secret.” Her voice dropped to a whisper, as if to keep the baby from hearing her. “I forget sometimes, too. I wake up in the morning after a dream where I’m skinny, and for a few minutes I just lie there, completely unaware that I’m not anymore. Until I try to get up and I remember.”

“Maybe I just don’t think it’s fair that you have to do all of the work. All I had to do was…”

“You don’t have to spell it out. I was there.” With her lips still twisted into a grin, Sara crooked a finger at him. He scooted closer until her thighs were draped over his. He had to reach over her stomach, but he managed to give her the kiss she asked for by pointing to his mouth and then hers. “This baby is very lucky to have you as a daddy.” She gave him another kiss, smacking her lips against his playfully. “Once she’s here, I’ll make sure you don’t forget her.” Sara winked. “You can be on 24-hour diaper duty.”

“You push her out; I’ll clean her up.” Grissom nodded. “Sounds fair.”

He’d just gotten back into his reading when Sara tugged at his sleeve. “She’s moving again.”

His book slipped to the floor as he settled between her legs, placing his cheek on the bump he’d loved long before it became visible. He felt Sara’s fingers combing through his hair, and his daughter turning somersaults beneath his ear.

And for the five millionth time, he wondered what he’d ever done to deserve any of this.

*****

Fin
Tags: -grissom/sara, belismakr, kristenelizabeth

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[info]mingsmommy

May 8 2007, 01:43:22 UTC 5 years ago

*tackle hugs you*

You are the best! The very, very, very best! This is better than antibiotics. You are so SWEET. I love this fic and I love you.

His book slipped to the floor as he settled between her legs, placing his cheek on the bump he’d loved long before it became visible. Awww...just awww.

This was fluffy and gooey and wonderful and in character. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

[info]cabooklover

May 8 2007, 01:43:30 UTC 5 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwww, how freaking cute!!!!!!!!!

[info]csipal

May 8 2007, 01:46:20 UTC 5 years ago

Awww. This made me miss being pregnant with my boys.

[info]phdelicious

May 8 2007, 01:51:48 UTC 5 years ago

Mmmm fluff.

[info]smashleyloureed

May 8 2007, 01:52:19 UTC 5 years ago

I definitely needed this fluff too!
So adorable. Thanks!

[info]dawning_star

May 8 2007, 01:53:48 UTC 5 years ago

Awwwwwww!

[info]grand_falloon

May 8 2007, 02:01:20 UTC 5 years ago

Very tasty fluff...thank you

[info]doom_cherries

May 8 2007, 02:39:24 UTC 5 years ago

That made my heart swell.

[info]ricker23a

May 8 2007, 02:41:39 UTC 5 years ago

Awwww. Perfect beddie-bye time fluff. Just what I needed to end a crappy day on a lovely note. Thanks! :)

[info]phoenix38133

May 8 2007, 03:33:58 UTC 5 years ago

That was awesome.I always hope that you post fics and it never fails that they are great! YAY!

[info]bella_stella9

May 8 2007, 03:38:01 UTC 5 years ago

Ahhhh, this is so what I just needed. It's balm on my soul, so to say. *gives you a big bear hug* Thanks a lot!

[info]jenbachand

May 8 2007, 05:01:45 UTC 5 years ago

ZOMG Geek Baby!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was made of fluffy goodness. Very great. Wonderful to come home to after leaking my brain all over my last final.

Thank you for writing loveliness. :)

[info]zamboni12

May 8 2007, 07:48:00 UTC 5 years ago

*sigh* I just can say *sigh* So wonderful! You not only gave [info]mingsmommy a beautiful gift but some others too. It even has arrived here in germany and it found another afflicting soul. Fluff can be so healing. *sigh*
Very well done!
Take care, Heike

[info]tcdarcy7

May 8 2007, 07:57:46 UTC 5 years ago

“You push her out; I’ll clean her up.” Grissom nodded. “Sounds fair.”...... hehe. Thank you.

[info]elialys

May 8 2007, 08:14:59 UTC 5 years ago

You do the best fluffs ever ♥ What a lovely day to start my day, thank you!!

[info]lynn_fox

May 8 2007, 09:39:50 UTC 5 years ago

*tries to form coherent words*
So sweeeeeeet!! I wanna have another baby! *sigh*

[info]zequins

May 8 2007, 14:40:31 UTC 5 years ago

SO adorable!! I loved it. Well done :P

-Tanny

[info]rowofstars

May 8 2007, 14:48:16 UTC 5 years ago

Geek baby fluff is the greatest fluff in the world. *sniffle*

[info]gsrblackrose86

May 8 2007, 16:57:31 UTC 5 years ago

Awww, just what I needed today. Thank you. =)

[info]buffyangellvr23

May 8 2007, 17:01:48 UTC 5 years ago

*joins in the tacklehug* This is sooooo many kinds of adorable!

[info]eagertalker

May 8 2007, 20:20:58 UTC 5 years ago

Fluff is good for all of us once in a while. This story made me smile and cast my mind back to my first pregancy. The ninth month was interesting to say the least and sometimes I could swear that the kid was playing scoccer with my kidneys. It nice to have them happy and on the same page for once. anne

[info]emmelinegreer

May 8 2007, 21:11:07 UTC 5 years ago

I had the worst day. It was a whole thing with a computer glitch and £11,000 going missing - really quite stressful. And now I'm sitting with a stupid looking big grin on my face. How do you do that?

Just the perfect amount of fluff. Me and my stress-levels thank you :)

[info]bongoz

May 9 2007, 03:10:57 UTC 5 years ago

*sigh* When you do fluff, you do fluff right. The last three lines just made me melt. I'm having a busy week so I'm glad for the chance to just take a break and contemplate a geekbaby. Love it!

[info]ashleigh58

May 10 2007, 15:55:22 UTC 5 years ago

Awwww! That just gave me the sweetest butterflies! And it took me back to the days of feeling my babies move and my husband with his head on my belly....*sniff*

This was perfect, as usual!

[info]rhcp_csi

May 10 2007, 21:06:15 UTC 5 years ago

You just made my day perfect!
Wonderful story, absolute cute.
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