Gipsy ([info]ex_gipsy547) wrote in [info]geekfiction,

Good Clean Fun

Title: Good Clean Fun
Author: Gipsy/Em
Rating: NC-17, This is smut for smut sakes people!
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my ideas and my Muse
A/N: This is in response to a challenge set by [info]bonnieaw. Probably not what you had in mind Bonnie but I hope you do enjoy it. Did I already say this was plotless smut? I warned you! Huge merci beaucoup goes to [info]mingsmommyfor being much more than a beta.



Gil Grissom woke up to find a tiny ray of sunlight had broken through the shield of his heavy curtains to rest directly on his right eye.  He sat up in bed, eyelids heavy, blinking away the remnant of some erotic dream. It was all pretty vague now but it involved Sara, he knew that much. And a chair…or was it a table?


 

The side of the bed where the object of his dreams usually lay was empty, and had been for a while if the coldness of the sheets was any indication. A peek at his alarm clock confirmed his suspicions that he had overslept; funny how 8 hours felt like oversleeping to him.


 

He wrapped himself in a thick robe, since his throbbing erection wasn’t showing any sign of going away. It was so painful that he thought about remedying the problem himself but quickly dismissed the thought. Since he’d been with Sara self-pleasuring just wasn’t satisfying- unless she was watching -so, with his cock leading the way, he went looking for her.


 

The smell of hour old coffee greeted him in the kitchen along with the lingering smell of burned toast, but no signs of Sara. He quickly toured the house and his ears picked up on some music as he approached the door leading to the garage. He opened the door and he heard Sara before he saw her.


 

Clad in denim shorts and a soggy old bleach streaked shirt, she was singing along to the radio. Grissom noted the freshly washed car and the accomplished look on her face as she seemed to appraise her work.


 

He watched her frizzy ponytail move along with the bob of her head as she poured her heart out in the song’s chorus, Listen to your heart when he's calling for you.
Listen to your heart there's nothing else you can do. I don't know where you're going and I don't know why, but listen to your heart before you tell him goodbye
.


 

Barefoot, he carefully made his way to her, noticing the large puddles of water that had settled in the driveway where the car had been moments earlier. He turned the volume of the old stereo down as he went by, not wanting to startle her but she still jumped when she turned around, “Jesus, Grissom!” she shrieked.


 

He tightened the terry cloth belt around him, the robe barely hiding his still aching erection, “Sorry, Honey, good morning.” His husky morning voice purred as he let his eyes wander over her braless figure. Even in his earlier dream, she didn’t look this sexy: some unruly curls escaped from her ponytail framed her face perfectly and the water had wet her shirt in all the right places.


 

Oblivious to the state of his arousal, she motioned to the car with the exuberance of a 5 year old, “Look how clean it is, can you believe how great -” The intensity of his stare silenced her mid sentenced. She stood still, squeezing the water out of the sponge she was still holding, questioning him silently.


 

He smirked as he widened his stance, deliberately flashing her. She raised an eyebrow as she assessed his condition. Tossing the sponge away, she closed the garage door with the press of a button before returning his smirk and tugging at his collar to bring him into a passionate embrace.


 

Their kiss was anything but gentle as she slid her tongue past his lips and plunged it deep in his mouth. He sucked on it with fervor while pressing his arousal on her upper thigh. The dripping head of his erection darkened the denim of her pants as he rubbed himself on her, ready to let go at any time.


 

Sensing the urgency of the moment, Sara raised her arms, letting Grissom peel off her soaked shirt like a second skin. His hands wandered on her torso, his fingers drawing circles around her breasts before he dipped down to take a stiff nipple in his mouth.


 

Sara’s whole body jerked as he simultaneously teased one nipple with his tongue and the other one with his thumb. She met each of his shallow thrust with a movement of her hips while attempting to free herself of her shorts.


 

Grissom’s free hand dueled with hers in an effort to pull her cut off shorts past her knees. When they finally succeeded, he lifted her off the ground, firmly planting her against the cool metal of the car.


 

Her legs were like tentacles around his body as he propelled himself forward, burying himself into her as deeply as physically possible. Sara sucked in a breath at the motion, releasing it in a loud cry as Grissom started to move within her.


 

His thrusts were hard and fast as he held on to Sara’s lower body, bringing her forward with each drive. Her mouth and tongue traced his face, kissing his lips, nibbling at the line of his jaw and sucking on his chin dimple. She reluctantly relinquished the salty skin as Grissom’s head rolled back in a guttural grunt.


 

Sara’s gaze followed the path of a drop of sweat as it fell off Grissom’s temple to nestle in the cleavage of her breasts. She let out a moan as she took in the sight of their coupling. Grissom’s engorged member moving in and out of her was the most erotic thing she’d ever seen and her body responded accordingly. She started moving faster underneath him, her breath quickening with each movement.


 

Grissom searched her eyes, holding her gaze as he always did when he was about to come undone and she dug her heels into his back, urging him on. She brought her hand between them, pressing on her clit with unprecedented need as she felt Grissom give a few long and slow strokes before giving in to his long awaited climax.


 

Her body glistened with sweat as her own orgasm hit her with unexpected force. Grissom’s satiated body supported her as she rode waves of incomparable pleasure with a throaty wail that she barely recognized as her own.


 

Still lodged in her, Grissom’s trembling hands lowered her legs gently to the ground. He kissed her face reverently, licking the sweat off her upper lip.


 
They were still breathless; their heartbeats barely normalizing when Grissom noticed the music was still on. He grinned as he realized the same album as earlier was playing. He entwined her ponytail around his fingers, beaming in the aftermath of their lovemaking.


 

“So Roxette, uh?” he asked with a chuckle.


 

She looked at him in question before breaking into a shy grin as he pointed to the radio. “Yeah…so? It’s good cleaning music.”


 

“I bet.” He teased.


 

“Good sex music?” she offered with a cocky smile.


 

A raised eyebrow was his only answer before he claimed her lips and raised her bottom, inviting her legs to resume their position around his waist.


 

“Bed?” she gasped.


 

An indecipherable grunt was his reply as he lay her down and took her hand to lead her inside.


 
Sara paused at the doorway, admiring her hard work one last time and she had to laugh at the sight: there on the shiny surface was a perfect impression of her ass.


 

 


 



Tags: *adult, -grissom/sara, gipsy

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[info]elialys

March 13 2007, 14:09:28 UTC 5 years ago

*Happy purr* This is so great NOT to expect anything from you during the next (two?) week(s), and check geekfiction to find your smutfic ^^ ^^ ^^ It's a really good surprise =D Les vacances se passent bien?? LOL!!

That was so unsurprisingly enjoyable and HOT, Em, as always, I adore your smut, I love the scenario -hmmmm Sara washing a car and Grissom completely horny X_X- and the end made me laugh!! ^^ ^^
Big THANKS to you and your lovely muse!!

♥Poutous♥

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 17:52:11 UTC 5 years ago

Well, I'm leaving tomorrow morning and I just had to post this before.;)Now you really can't expect anything more for at least another week!

Thank you, your words always make put a silly grin on my face!:D

[info]peridot_lines

March 13 2007, 14:37:34 UTC 5 years ago

You *did* finish it before you left! Yay! And the song totally worked, so you're good there too!

Smut for smuts sake it may be, but it's VERY hot, and very good!

Sara paused at the doorway, admiring her hard work one last time and she had to laugh at the sight: there on the shiny surface was a perfect impression of her ass.

THIS, made me LOL, it's an amazingly hilarious element of realism, and just really cute.

Great job Em!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 17:54:33 UTC 5 years ago

I did finish thanks to super speedy beta Lisa and you can actually thank her for the ending, she inspired me for that part!:)

The plot got lost along the way, but OH WELL! It is what it is.

I'm so glad you liked it Chou-Puce!

See ya in a week!;)

[info]phdelicious

March 13 2007, 14:52:41 UTC 5 years ago

Hot! And Sara's ass print on the car = hahaha!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 17:55:38 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed, although I owe Mingsmommy one for the ass print, all her idea.;)

[info]bonnieaw

March 13 2007, 15:02:33 UTC 5 years ago

Ah Em! You so did it! ;-) I knew this was gonna be awesome and you so did it! Horny Griss rocks!

And, you did it before you left! I wasn't expecting this yet, what makes it even better. However, now that I know how incredible satisfying it is to give you those challenges.. I don't know if I'll manage to suppress the urge to give you a new one! You made my day hon,

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 17:57:26 UTC 5 years ago

YAY!!!I was so afraid you would be a little dissapointed since it ain't EXACTLY what you asked for...what can I say, the smut took over as usual! And yes Horny Griss does indeed rock!;)

Thank you honey, bring on the challenges!

[info]bonnieaw

5 years ago

[info]bonnieaw

5 years ago

[info]mingsmommy

March 13 2007, 15:58:09 UTC 5 years ago

Butt icon for you! And yes, I'd take the impression of HIS ass on anything I own, permanently.

I like the changes you made.

Great job! Have a wonderful, wonderful trip.

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 18:00:18 UTC 5 years ago

BUTT ICON!!!YAY!

Thank you for the great feedback and suggestions.;) I'm glad you liked the final product!

I'm already annoying hubby with a bunch of "are we there yet?". LOL

See you in a week!!!

[info]elfling65

March 13 2007, 17:43:36 UTC 5 years ago

Good way to start the day... Thank you!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 18:01:30 UTC 5 years ago

It's always a pleasure to contribute to a good start of the day! Thank you so kindly for the comment!

[info]gsr4ever

March 13 2007, 17:52:53 UTC 5 years ago

Car washing smut? EXCELLENT!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 18:02:51 UTC 5 years ago

:D Thank you! I actually just came back from a car wash and I kept being reminded of my fic,lol. I'm glad you liked it!

[info]joss80

March 13 2007, 18:54:18 UTC 5 years ago

Roxette AND a butt impression on a car?
LOVE IT! :)

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 19:11:54 UTC 5 years ago

Roxette IS good sex, euh I mean good cleaning music!:) I'm glad you enjoyed the butt impression as well, thank you for the great comment!

[info]doom_cherries

March 13 2007, 20:19:27 UTC 5 years ago

Is it sad I really liked the image of Grissom's cock leading the way? No?...

;) Awesome job.

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 20:55:28 UTC 5 years ago

Not sad at all, I quite like that image myself!

Thank you!;)

[info]tayeatra

March 13 2007, 21:33:30 UTC 5 years ago

I Washed my car the other day. Compared to this... it was rubbish.

*sigh*

Oh well, wonderful fic! Thanks!

(It's a tenuous link but anything with Sara + water = sin icon!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 13 2007, 23:59:53 UTC 5 years ago

I washed my car today too and there was sadly no smut involve.

Thank you for the great comment, I do appreciate it!:) And I love that icon!

[info]tayeatra

5 years ago

[info]mooquackingcow

March 13 2007, 21:58:10 UTC 5 years ago

EEE OMG *purr*
I totally made a music video to that song like, a day ago. That was quite funny to see the lyrics. XD *snort*
*sigh* I love it. water always equals smut, no matter what the situation is. :D

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 14 2007, 00:01:53 UTC 5 years ago

EEE OMG *purr* right back at ya!

I can't believe you made a video to that song, talk about great minds thinking alike!:D It's just that kind of song that you just HAVE to sing along to!

Thank you Moo!

[info]cabooklover

March 13 2007, 23:54:01 UTC 5 years ago

That was great! Very enjoyable! You think if all us fans banded together and bought CSI, and then got Showtime to pick it up we could ever get an episode like this???? I'm just saying....

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 14 2007, 00:05:18 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much for the kind words!

You think if all us fans banded together and bought CSI, and then got Showtime to pick it up we could ever get an episode like this? I wish! I'm always hoping for a Grissom/Sara spin off on Showtime or HBO once CSI is over...We can always dream!

[info]jaded_chord

March 14 2007, 01:03:34 UTC 5 years ago

That last line is hilarious.

Any chance we'll see this sort of thing on screen? No? Thank goodness for fanfic I say.

Wonderfully hot. Great job. :)

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 14 2007, 09:51:07 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! Funny(sad?) how I'm minutes from leaving and I'm still on here.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank mingsmommy for that last line, she inspired it.;)

Take care,
Emxxx

[info]ashleigh58

March 14 2007, 14:16:28 UTC 5 years ago

So, with his cock leading the way, he went looking for her.

Ha! Love that line. I just picture him walking through the house actually talking to it....ya know, "Come on, big guy! Go find her, go find Sara." like he's talking to a scent dog or something. LOL

Love waking up to plotless smut. *RAWR* And Roxette was an EXCELLENT choice. Heeee!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 15 2007, 23:46:55 UTC 5 years ago

I think that's probably my favorite part as well so I'm glad you liked it!:)

Plotless smut can be good everynow and then, it was fun to write! Your comments pretty much made my day so thank you!:D

[info]giwu

March 14 2007, 23:53:36 UTC 5 years ago

Wow-this was so great! You rock whether in drabble, ficlet or one-shot. I love the ass print and the fact that Grissom's other head was leading the way...heh heh you and Mingsmommy both have a wicked sense of humor.

I am still working on the last challenge you gave me. So far, I can do the story, just it is VERY boring. If I can't think of anything fun or smutty about it when you get back, I may have to ask for a back-up challenge.

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 15 2007, 23:58:02 UTC 5 years ago

Hey long time no talk :). I'm sorry my challenge is...well challenging. When I get back on sunday, I'll figure out a new one if you want!

Thank you for the great comment, as plotless as it was I'm glad you enjoyed it, ass print and all!

Take care,
Em

[info]gsrfan7

March 15 2007, 02:54:10 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you. : )

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 15 2007, 23:58:41 UTC 5 years ago

My pleasure ;), thank you for reading!

[info]boubabe14

March 15 2007, 05:49:29 UTC 5 years ago

“Look how clean it is, can you believe how great -” The intensity of his stare silenced her mid sentenced. She stood still, squeezing the water out of the sponge she was still holding, questioning him silently.

This was my fav part...that Sara just stops when she senses Grissom's need. That is such a Geek Mindmeld thing going on there. Love it! Nice job.

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 15 2007, 23:59:57 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a nice comment, I appreciate it so much!

[info]zequins

March 15 2007, 20:54:16 UTC 5 years ago

Weee I love Roxette... and now I will never be able to listen to that song without thinking about geeksex!

Emmu this was hot!! Good job girl :P

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 16 2007, 00:01:21 UTC 5 years ago

Roxette is so cheesy but you know, you just have to sing along to it! I hope I haven't ruined the song for you,lol!

Thank you Tanny! Talk to you soon!

[info]zequins

5 years ago

[info]zamboni12

March 20 2007, 12:46:06 UTC 5 years ago

How could I miss this??? I must have had a totally blackout! So, okay, better late than never, right?
What a cute, hot "car-washing smut-story"! I just love it!
so, with his cock leading the way, he went looking for her. Bwhahahhha, that is soo funny...soo typical male. Perfect! Not to mention the "ass-impression". Very well done!

[info]ex_gipsy547

March 20 2007, 13:09:47 UTC 5 years ago

That's it, I'm going to Germany to kidnap you. I'll set you up in a really nice guestroom and bring you out when I need a cheer or an ego boost!:D You can bring your family along if you want to!

Thank you for the always kind words, you do indeed rock!

Emxxx

[info]zamboni12

5 years ago

[info]jessickuh

June 2 2007, 17:43:42 UTC 5 years ago

Oh wow, how did I miss this? elialys's "yay porn!" icon is right.

[info]ex_gipsy547

June 3 2007, 02:20:48 UTC 4 years ago

Glad you liked it Jess, thanks!:)
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