Kate ([info]peridot_lines) wrote in [info]geekfiction,
2007-01-29 22:20:00
  • Mood: horny
  • Music: Seinfeld in the bground

Drabble

Title: Coming Home
Author: viggygirl
Format: Drabble (100 words EXACTLY!)
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer:These characters aren't mine.
Spoilers: None
Pairing: Sara/Grissom
Author's Note: Thanks to [info]gipsy for giving this a quick glance. It was inspired by this week's prompt at [info]gsrdrabbles thigh. Please read and review!

Grissom moaned as the searing cavern of Sara’s mouth engulfed him. Her tongue swirled around the head, stroking and savoring the taste of his skin. The pleasurable pain of her fingernails pressing into his thighs and the wet heat of her mouth coalesced into abiding need. There was nothing better than this moment, collapsed on the couch, Sara kneeling between his legs. The hot whisper of her breath, caressing his skin.

A hand slipped from his thigh, moving down her stomach to swipe through her cleft. Grissom looked down as the sight before him, thighs tensing, groaning through his climax.
Tags: *adult, -grissom/sara, peridot_lines

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  • 24 comments

[info]jaded_chord

January 30 2007, 04:32:16 UTC 5 years ago

A prompt like that just screams 'smut'.

Very hot, very nice. Well done!

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 04:35:22 UTC 5 years ago

I know! I couldn't resist! Thanks for reading!

[info]giwu

January 30 2007, 04:59:03 UTC 5 years ago

I usually don't read drabbles...this one was great and leaves me wanting MORE!!

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 05:01:19 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for reading!!!! :)

[info]giwu

January 30 2007, 05:06:46 UTC 5 years ago

No problem-feel free to take a look at the story I have completed on Geekfiction, even though I pair Grissom with someone other than Sara. :)

[info]bonnieaw

January 30 2007, 05:50:28 UTC 5 years ago

Aah.. This was so powerful! Thanks for sharing and I'm glad I can go to bed now:p

btw ;) here you have her between his legs (just imagine it's her)

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 05:59:10 UTC 5 years ago

Interesting idea... hadn't thought of that. :)

Thanks for reading, as well as the suggestion... perhaps in the future. ;)

[info]zamboni12

January 30 2007, 09:18:58 UTC 5 years ago

bwhahah Point to your icon! Great!

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 16:47:49 UTC 5 years ago

Okay... so, last night, I read your comment, and thought one thing... this morning, paying attention to icons and all that good stuff... um... yeah, I'm a dork. Thanks again for reading!

[info]bonnieaw

January 30 2007, 18:14:56 UTC 5 years ago

Haha yeah, I figured you had no idea where I was talking about when I saw your first replay :p

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 18:24:24 UTC 5 years ago

*sigh* See... the thing is that I wondered if it was some sort of reference to my first smutty story (Sara imagining Grissom) and thought maybe that was what you were talking about. Sleep does this great thing to me, clarifying things though... I'm such a dork!

[info]bonnieaw

January 30 2007, 18:39:49 UTC 5 years ago

You have an other one!?

Show me!

[info]zamboni12

January 30 2007, 09:18:04 UTC 5 years ago

Absolutely perfect! You got to the point. Hot, short, sexy. Perfect!

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 15:14:15 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]zamboni12

January 30 2007, 16:42:45 UTC 5 years ago

Your welcome.
Oh, points to your Icon. Is it yours? Can I snatch it?

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 16:46:22 UTC 5 years ago

It isn't mine I got it somewhere in the land of LJ. I credit everyone that I snag icons from, so if you snag it from me, credit them.

[info]zamboni12

January 30 2007, 17:16:09 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks a lot. I promise, I´ll credit everyone when I use it.

[info]doom_cherries

January 30 2007, 19:44:00 UTC 5 years ago

Yay, smut! Glad I brought my laptop to school today. :)

[info]peridot_lines

January 30 2007, 20:41:27 UTC 5 years ago

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! :)

[info]jessickuh

January 31 2007, 06:35:31 UTC 5 years ago

So where is this first smutty story of yours?

[info]peridot_lines

January 31 2007, 12:33:05 UTC 5 years ago

The Absence of Stars Angsty, sadness...

[info]jessickuh

February 1 2007, 00:35:18 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, I've read that one. I forgot it was your first ever.

[info]smacky30

February 2 2007, 01:20:09 UTC 5 years ago

Not sure how I missed this. Very hot! Very hot indeed!

[info]peridot_lines

February 2 2007, 01:23:36 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! Glad you found it! :D
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