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Masterpiece

Title: Masterpiece
Author: ScullyAsTrinity
Rating: NC-17
Author's notes: This is kinda for Lauren, but she'll know why. It's also kinda for Kay, who has been giving us SUCH great smut lately.
Summary: He was Matisse, Picasso, Turner...

Read on!

He coerced color out of her.

It was beautiful.

"Touch yourself and tell me what you feel." It wasn't a question, it was an order and she was a good little kitten, reaching down to feel her sex.

He licked his lips and growled, wanting to lap her up, all of her. But this was his treat, he wanted to watch.

"Talk to me."

Her response was a cry, looking up at him through half-lidded eyes. She hated him and loved him, the pool of desire in her stomach spreading throughout her body rapidly. Heat. It was all he saw, just heat and color.

He felt like Matisse, he was Matisse. The vibrant colors applied so roughly, the artist in a hurry to view his masterpiece in whole. There was movement in the long flowing curves that were her body.

Chocolate covered cherries, he wanted to taste. He needed to taste. His brain held him back, forcing his eyes down her body to the glistening beacon between her legs. Sara spread herself for him, seeming to know exactly what to do. Open and weeping, he wanted to touch.

Matisse gave way to Rothko, subdued hues here, making him want to weep. There were hungry, bright, brash pieces of palette on her face, rendering him to ashes. Transcendence through alternating hues, amazing emotions. They made him want to burn her, but they mostly made him want to weep. He was doing it all for her.

Botticelli in the sound she made, dipping her fingers willingly inside herself. All pale skin and sumptuous form. "I want to hear you Sara. I can see you, I want to hear you."

"Griss, I..."

He was asking a lot of her, an artist begging the musician. He didn't need it, not like he needed to be inside of her, but he wanted it so badly, he yearned for it.

"I want to feel you inside of me..." But even as she moaned it, an index finger located her clit and traced over it, applying only the hint of pressure. Painting over it with a harder swipe she cried out for him, to him. "Feels so good, so, oh god, so good."

He had the eye of a critic, watching her pleasure herself. The exhibit was glorious, but it was missing something, something...

"Cuh, Grissom, don't know, my, cuh..."

And he dabbled a new color onto the palette, drawing it into the ones already there, creating an entirely new one. "Tell me honey."

"Know you want to hear..." Her eyes were open, pools of mahogany and pine, daring him to fall into them. "My cunt Griss, it's so hot. So warm, it's warm Griss."

Like an artist to a new canvas, she didn't know where to begin, but he was thrilled with her words and how she worded them for him.

Turner, cataclysmic force when she came. Lost on a sea, overboard, licking her lips, wishing to be redone, restored, rehung.

And he was there to catch her, kiss her, immerse into her masterpiece when she was finished. He was Picasso, drawing on his experience to be born anew.
Tags: *adult, -grissom/sara, scullyastrinity

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[info]bugaboobrittz

April 16 2005, 20:05:31 UTC 7 years ago

Damn, that was hot.

I love the perspective used, forming around Matisse, Picasso, Rothko. It painted a wonderful image (no pun intended) for the backdrop of the story.

Two thumbs up.

[info]ckofshadows

April 16 2005, 22:11:22 UTC 7 years ago

A combination of GS sex and Mark Rothko. God I need a cigarette.

[info]binx_349

April 16 2005, 23:13:26 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, you already know I like it. But hell, I'll always tell you again.

You know, I have the sudden urge to take up painting. ;)

[info]reverendkilljoy

April 17 2005, 01:49:04 UTC 7 years ago

This is not a pipe.

I hate to be the one to pee in the punchbowl here, but I have to tell you, this piece didn't work for me. Oh, it worked on an intellectual level. I admire it's technique and it's chutzpah. Not many people usually join me this far out on the art-for-art's-sake limb, and yay for you for trying.

That said, I think your word choice, especially in the middle third, is a little calculated. The diction is cold and the action isn't. it's not just you, I think James Joyce is the same way. Premeditated. Some people dig it. Here, for me, it comes off over-thought.

The idea of the story is great, and the choice of artists is logical and illuminating, but the prose as a whole does not hold together as well as the sum of its parts.

Sorry.

Do you still love me?

-M

[info]velocityofsound

April 17 2005, 15:09:46 UTC 7 years ago

And I'm going to come down on the absolute opposite side. I loved it. (I also love Joyce, perhaps therein lies our problem.)

With every successive piece you post, I am more and more impressed with your descriptive language. God, can you paint a sensual feast for the reader. Your imagery here is unique, and exquisitely executed.

I’ll echo previous statements that your choices by way of artists were perfect, and that this is a brave piece (for several reasons) that I admire greatly. And looking back, I didn’t even realize how short a piece it was, because it’s so rich and dense.

Also, fucking hot. Did I say that? Hot.

Lovely Leslie, thank you. It was a treat. And yeah, I need a cigarette too.
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